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Death Playing

Category: Poems | Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 8:09 pm

try to see if you can find the meaning behind this poem. If you don't tell me so i can tell you.

Death Playing

Do re me
I hear piano playing
I feel so relaxed and calm
I get up from my seat
I walk to the music
It begins to fade
I run
Its fading more
I run faster and faster
Stop, wait
Wheres the music?
I hear nothing but...
The sound of my death

rate this poem on a scale of 1-10 and please be honest.
What should I improve on (if needed)
Thanks!


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Comments

 

SongofJoy57 wrote on Sat Apr 12, 2008 3:14 pm:


You are just a regular little old Emily Dickinson, Clarissa . . . you should research her work. Very creative, you are.





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