Friends
Category:
Poems | Posted:
Fri Apr 11, 2008 8:34 pm
Friends
Friends come and go out of our lives
Enjoy there company while there with you
Talk, laugh, get into trouble
Never forget to say "hi" or "bye"
because...
Friends come and go and u never know when
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improvments?
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Death Playing
Category:
Poems | Posted:
Fri Apr 11, 2008 8:09 pm
try to see if you can find the meaning behind this poem. If you don't tell me so i can tell you.
Death Playing
Do re me
I hear piano playing
I feel so relaxed and calm
I get up from my seat
I walk to the music
It begins to fade
I run
Its fading more
I run faster and faster
Stop, wait
Wheres the music?
I hear nothing but...
The sound of my death
rate this poem on a scale of 1-10 and please be honest.
What should I improve on (if needed)
Thanks!
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